how does this world work? they are all animals, yet do things that humans would do. like use tools and such, the magic is a cool bonus. they all live togeather like people, but since they are animals how can that be? what do the carnivores eat?
I would put up the full workings of my world, except that people keep stealing everything I post. Even the crappy stuff. Which I don't understand at all. So, all the good stuff will be revealed within the storyline. You'll just have to wait - I hope you understand.
Hey, leave her alone, ma'am(or sir). She works hard and she has copyrights on the things that are stolen. Give her a break! I'm sure if you were working hard on something, finally got it done, and people stole it, you would feel the same way. So yeah, don't pout.
I love how you use different fonts for different characters; it really helps to determine their voice when your reading. C:
The only thing that I don't like about this page is the final close up of the wolf. It's lovely, very detailed, and would be brilliant on its own, but it just doesn't follow suit with the rest of the comic's style, so it seems a bit out of place.
Other than that, very well done. I love the style that you've chosen to draw in for this project, and over all, the coloration of each page is quite unique to other graphic novels that I've seen. Great job. ;D
It's interesting how much information can be gleaned from so little text. You're very good at manipulating conversation to make your audience assume all the right things. I'm almost more impressed by your writing than your artistic ability... almost.